Keep
In a skyscraping tower late in the afternoon
we disturbed each other awake.
Bedding sprawled over us like a fabrication
that was warm to believe, and you
spoke in the dim room of staying
horizontal on the mattress indefinitely.
The room was getting darker. Against your wishes
I went vertical and stood at the panoramic cliff
where glass divided the cavernous room
from the sunset city it overlooked.
The dull orange juice of dusk
condensed over a grid of structural concrete
and flickering artificial lights.
The sun was a wicked glowing pumpkin
on the other side of our building.
I watched our shadow slowly
submerge the city in rectangular night
and I returned running to the fabric
that keeps you and I safe
indefinitely.
joe, i like this one a lot. “The sun was a wicked glowing pumpkin” leaves a really sweet visual. i’m glad you’re still pushin’ em out even with grad school being all busy and junk…good stuff.
bridgetteshively said this on December 31, 2008 at 4:20 am |
Thanks Bridgette. Are you still doing any writing?
josephmchugh said this on January 2, 2009 at 11:09 pm |
barely…i’m barely doing anything. but i’m working on that.
bridgetteshively said this on January 12, 2009 at 3:27 am |